The Mystery Treasure.

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The Mystery Treasure.

One beautiful sunny day there lived two wonderful girls called Harmony and Emma. Harmony was as beautiful as a Cinderella and Emma was as wonderful as an flower. They were like best mates.

One day, they were watching t.v. and this handsome man said,“There is an mystery treasure hunt . The first one who finds it get to keep it “ Harmony and Emma had a great idea to go and enter the mystery treasure hunt. They went to tell their mother before going to enter it.They asked their mother if they were allowed to go and find the mystery treasure hunt. Their mother said,”Yes but only if I drop you off“ she said so we replied, “Sure Mum”. Off they went.They knew they were going to a mysterious forest. Emma was a little scared but Harmony was brave and tough.

When they got out of the car they saw  lots of people and the handsome man  who is on the news on TV. He told them to come and get ready, so they did. The handsome tv man was starting to get the treasure hunt ready. People were starting to line up. He yelled out, “On your marks, get set and GO! They were the first ones to go because they were very fit and smart. They searched everywhere but nothing.They were kind of lost. Harmony was very scared but Emma was more scared than Harmony. Emma tried to be brave but she thought that they were really lost.They were lost because they were surrounded by beautiful blue clear water and amazing tall trees. Emma said, “call mum” so Harmony tried but her phone did not have enough credit. Emma tried as well,but her phone was too far away from her mum.

Later in the day Emma had an idea to jump across the bulky rocks so Emma had a go. She made it, then it was Harmony that needed to jump across the bright warm river.She was so brave and so fast that she jumped , but she almost fell in the warm water. Luckily Emma caught her hand and pulled her towards her. After they jumped across the magic rock Emma saw a golden box she said ”that’s the mystery treasure yeah” They ran fast as they could with happiness. When they found their way out they ran to the handsome tv man and said, “We found the mystery treasure yeah!”.

The handsome man called everyone to come back by blowing his special and interesting whistle. When people heard the loud whistle they knew that someone had won or found the golden mystery treasure so then they ran to see who won it. When the people came they saw the two beautiful girls holding it. Some  people were jealous but they were all happy. Later when it was time to go, Emma called her mother to come and pick them up. Their mother came and asked,”Did you win it?”. We both said,”Yep we did!” They went home both exhausted but really happy that they had and they both looked at the new golden treasure.