The Terrifying Shark Attack
One Day there lived a little funny boy called Jack and a little jealous girl called Aireen. Jack had short black hair, brown sparkly brown eyes, tanned skin and a good personality. Aireen on the other hand has long ugly hair, dark black eyes and has a habit of being jealous of other people. Aireen and Jack loved to go fishing where the sharks were, as this was an area in the ocean where people could fish for humungous, delicious fish.
One day Aireen was jealous of Jack because he was making more friends then her. She started to feel angry. Then Aireen saw the boat and had an idea. Aireen asked Jack if they could go fishing and then Jacks said, “Of course, lets go!”. So Jack said good bye to his friends, got what they needed for fishing and off they went.
When Jack and Aireen got there, Aireen pushed Jack into the sea. Jack was surprised but Aireen said it was on accident and Jack believed her. Then at that moment his leg started bleeding in the sea as he had scraped it on a sharp rock when he fell in. As soon as his leg started bleeding, a great white shark who was swimming nearby, picked up the scent of Jacks blood. The shark started to swim in the direction of the blood. The shark never gave up on finding Jack because he hadn’t eaten for nearly two months. When the shark saw Jack, and Jack saw the shark, Jack started to swim faster and faster.When Jack got closer to the boat he yelled at Aireen to grab his hand, but Aireen said “No, I have always jealous of you and I have had enough!” “But what do you mean?”, yelled Jack, terrified of what was going to happen. “ I mean you always make good friends and you are better than me in everything. I just want more friends that all and to be famous like you in school”.
“I can help you make friends you know, being jealous is not the way to go. I never knew that you were jealous of me” Aireen thought about it for a while and said, “Well you're right, being jealous is not the way” .So then Jack said “Are we best friends again?”.
“Yeah I guess so, we are friends again!”
“Ok now GRAB MY HAND before this huge shark bites my legs off”!!! Aireen grabbed his hand and then said sorry to him.
Aireen and Jack became the best of friends. Aireen learnt not to be jealous of anyone. Talk about it first, before it becomes a problem.
1 comment:
Hi Malia,
I liked the way you added conversations in your story and I liked how you used powerful words.
Keep it up and great job.
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