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Wednesday 28 March 2012

The Mystery Treasure.




WALT write a narrative story based on our artwork.

The Mystery Treasure.

One beautiful sunny day there lived two wonderful girls called Harmony and Emma. Harmony was as beautiful as a Cinderella and Emma was as wonderful as an flower. They were like best mates.

One day, they were watching t.v. and this handsome man said,“There is an mystery treasure hunt . The first one who finds it get to keep it “ Harmony and Emma had a great idea to go and enter the mystery treasure hunt. They went to tell their mother before going to enter it.They asked their mother if they were allowed to go and find the mystery treasure hunt. Their mother said,”Yes but only if I drop you off“ she said so we replied, “Sure Mum”. Off they went.They knew they were going to a mysterious forest. Emma was a little scared but Harmony was brave and tough.

When they got out of the car they saw  lots of people and the handsome man  who is on the news on TV. He told them to come and get ready, so they did. The handsome tv man was starting to get the treasure hunt ready. People were starting to line up. He yelled out, “On your marks, get set and GO! They were the first ones to go because they were very fit and smart. They searched everywhere but nothing.They were kind of lost. Harmony was very scared but Emma was more scared than Harmony. Emma tried to be brave but she thought that they were really lost.They were lost because they were surrounded by beautiful blue clear water and amazing tall trees. Emma said, “call mum” so Harmony tried but her phone did not have enough credit. Emma tried as well,but her phone was too far away from her mum.

Later in the day Emma had an idea to jump across the bulky rocks so Emma had a go. She made it, then it was Harmony that needed to jump across the bright warm river.She was so brave and so fast that she jumped , but she almost fell in the warm water. Luckily Emma caught her hand and pulled her towards her. After they jumped across the magic rock Emma saw a golden box she said ”that’s the mystery treasure yeah” They ran fast as they could with happiness. When they found their way out they ran to the handsome tv man and said, “We found the mystery treasure yeah!”.

The handsome man called everyone to come back by blowing his special and interesting whistle. When people heard the loud whistle they knew that someone had won or found the golden mystery treasure so then they ran to see who won it. When the people came they saw the two beautiful girls holding it. Some  people were jealous but they were all happy. Later when it was time to go, Emma called her mother to come and pick them up. Their mother came and asked,”Did you win it?”. We both said,”Yep we did!” They went home both exhausted but really happy that they had and they both looked at the new golden treasure.





















































Thursday 1 March 2012

All About Me


Malo e lelei my name is Malia . I am 10 years old. I was born in Tonga in 2002. I have short black hair. I have a wonderful smile and beautiful, tan skin. My eyes are hazel brown just like autumn leaves falling on the ground. 

I have three brothers. Two of my brothers come to Tamaki Primary School with me. Their names are Falakiko and Tevita.I have a baby brother called Opeti Si. He is so cute like me. I am the only girl in my family. I live with my handsome brothers, my lovely parents and my wonderful Aunty . 
I am Tongan and I am so proud of my culture. When I think about my culture I think of the coconut trees, island food, the clothes and the traditional cultural dances.I really love my culture I  because it identifies who I am and what I believe.  
I enjoy playing sports like netball. I also like cooking,dancing, singing, helping and making sure that my friends and family are happy. I like going on the computer so I am looking forward to receiving my Netbook and using it during learning time. Maths, Topic and P.E are also my favourite subjects at school. 
I have got 4 best friends. Their names are Mopoa Leigh-Amber and Charday also Mehi.They mean a lot to me because if I am upset they cheer me up. When I am stuck on my work they sometimes come and help me.I wish they were my sisters because I fully trust them and they make me feel special.  
When I grow up I want to be a model and a singer. I want to be able to help people through music and beauty. I also want to be a teacher because I am interested in learning new things.